假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下面划一横线.并在该词下面写出改正后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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10．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear editor，
I'm a student of Yucai Middle School．In primary school there is nothing wrong with my eyes．But later because more and more lessons I couldn't see as clear as before．Sometimes I even couldn't see that the teacher wrote on the blackboard．In order to make things worse，my parents bought me a pair of glasses when I was in a second year of junior school．It was uncomfortable to wear glass．Final，I decided to wear contact lenses（隐形眼镜）．
They make me to look more beautiful and I have trouble in wearting them．Please tell me what I should do．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

分析这是王琳写给一位编辑的一封征求建议的信；信中写道：王琳是育才中学的一名学生，上初二的时候，由于眼睛看不清黑板，父母便给她买了一副眼镜；但是因为她感觉戴眼镜不舒服，最后，她便换成了隐形眼镜；虽然隐形眼镜让她看上去更漂亮了，但是她感觉戴它们太麻烦，所以她不知道该怎么办才好，就通过写信来征求编辑的意见．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm a student of Yucai Middle School．In primary school there is nothing wrong with
                                                                                            was
my eyes．But later because∧more and more lessons I couldn't see as clear as before．
                                        of                                                          clearly
Sometimes I even couldn't see that the teacher wrote on the blackboard．
                                             what
In order∧to make things worse，my parents bought me a pair of glasses when I was
           not
in a second year of junior school．It was uncomfortable to wear glass．Final，I decided to
   the                                                                                      glasses Finally
wear contact lenses（隐形眼镜）．They  make me to look more beautiful and I have trouble
                                                                        去掉to                          but
in wearting them．Please tell me what I should do．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

答案：
1．is改为was    考查时态   根据"In primary school"可知，这里讲述的是Wang Lin上小学时，她的眼睛的情况，所以应使用一般过去时；故用was
2．because之后加of    考查介词      连词because与复合介词because of都有"因为，由于"的意思；前者引导的是原因状语从句，而后者其后接的是名词、代词或动名词短语等；由于"more and more lessons"为名词短语，故此处应加介词of
3．clear改为 clearly   考查副词    由于此处用来修饰动词see，故用副词clearly
4．that改为 what     考查连接代词     此处用在动词 see 之后，引导的是宾语从句；由于该从句中缺少宾语，意为"…的…"；本句的意思是：有时我甚至看不见老师在黑板上写的字；故用what
5．在 order之后加not    考查句意理解以及动词不定式的否定形式    根据下一句"my parents bought me a pair of glasses"父母给我买了一副眼镜，可知此处的意思应是：为了不让事情变得更糟糕；故应在 order之后加not
6．a改为the   考查定冠词     此处用在序数词second之前，指的是：初中第二学年（即：初中二年级）；故用the
7．glass改为glasses     考查名词词义辨析   glass意为"玻璃"；glasses 意为"眼镜"；而这里指的是：戴眼镜很不舒服；故改为glasses
8．Final改为Finally    考查副词    此处在句中作时间状语，故用副词Finally
9．去掉to       考查固定结构     固定结构"make sb．do sth．"意为：让某人做某事；本句的意思是：它们让我看上去更漂亮了；故去掉to
10．and改为but   考查连词     分析句意可知，此处前后两句表达的是相反的意思，即：虽然它们让我看上去更漂亮了，但是戴它们却很麻烦；故改为but

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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