Question

根据下面提示用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，标题为：Have a healthy lifestyle
内容如下:
（1）许多青少年不注重健康问题的现象及导致的危害；
（2）简述你的看法，提出你的建议。
Have a healthy lifestyle
As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.     
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.

However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.

In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer. Go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇书面表达是半开放性作文，给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文以要点为基础，又不拘泥于要点，有适当的拓展，还使用了词组和句型：pay attention to注意，have a bad effect on对…有坏的影响， Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.这句话用了倒装句， And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.这两句话用了非限制性定语从句，

还有文章使用了First, Besides, Thirdly,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查半开放式书面表达