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5．假如你是李明，最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落，丧失信心，学习消极应付．请你用英语给他写一封建议信，指出其消极行为可能带来的不良后果，并结合自身实际提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法，鼓励他努力学习．注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear ZhangHua，
I'm sorry to hear that               ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是开放性作文，根据所给提示，给因考试不利情绪低落，丧失信心，学习消极应付的张华写一封建议信，指出其消极行为可能带来的不良后果，并结合自身实际提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法，鼓励他努力学习，又属于提纲作文．
在写作时以第一人称和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
重要短语：do well in（做得好），try one's best（尽力做某事），end up with sth（以某事而结束），quite a number of（很多），tend to do（倾向于），lose one's confidence（失去信心），leave behind（落后），in the face of（面临），calm down（镇静想，镇定），reflect sth（反思某事），make changes（作变化），ask sb for advice（向某人寻求建议），stick to（坚持人），make progress（取得进步），step by step（一步一步的），be of some help to sb（对某人有帮助）．
【高分句型一】
1．You are not the only one who seems to try his or her best but ends up with a failure in exams．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the only one"，关系代词"who"在定语从句中做主语．
【高分句型二】
2．I'm sure you know①that ②it's unwise to do so because you might be left far behind．
  ①此处是由"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"I'm sure  you know"．
②此处是由形式主语"it"引导的主语从句，结构为"It+be+形容词+to do sth"
3．①what we need to do is②to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice．
①此处是由疑问代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在从句中作主语，谓语动词用单数．
②此处是由三个不定式"to do"作表语，"and"后面的是省略了"to"的动词不定式（表示并列关系的两个或多个不定式可以省略"to"）．
【高分句型三】
3．If you have any question，please write to me．
此处是由"if"引导的宾语从句，主句为"please write to me"．
【高分句型四】
4．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
 此处是由省略了"that"的宾语从句，主句为"I firmly hope"．

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your last exam．You are not the only one who seems to try his or her best but ends up with a failure in exams．【高分句型一】Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence （lose heart） and don't want to study hard any longer．I'm sure you know that it's unwise to do so because you might be left far behind．【高分句型二】（消极行为可能带来的不良后果） 
 I was once in the same situation as yours．Failure is the mother of success．In the face of failure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or ask the teachers for advice．【高分句型三】Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success．【高分句型四】I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．（结合自身实际提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．