Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周，你班同学为迎接新年的到来，为元旦联欢会精心策划准备。请你按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Preparations for New Year’s Party”为题，给校刊写一篇英文稿件，介绍准备联欢会的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

（请务必将情景作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

Answer 1

【答案】

Preparations for New Year’s Party

Last Monday, realizing the new year of 2017 was coming, some of my classmates and I came up with an idea that we should hold a party to celebrate it. Without any delay we had a heated discussion about what to prepare and put down all the things needed on a list. Right after school, we headed to the nearby supermarket for shopping. Besides the decorations, we also bought some fruit and drinks.

The day before the party, we started to decorate the classroom. While I was writing “Happy New Year” on the blackboard, my classmates put up the paper festoons and balloons, cleaned the floor, and arranged the desks and chairs. Soon, the whole classroom took on a new look. At the sight of the scene, our head teacher gave us a thumbs-up.

What a joyful party would it be? A big smile spread across our faces.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是看图作文，仔细阅读图画及文字说明，首先应确定文章体裁：记叙文。第二，确定人称：第一人称。第三，确定时态：一般过去时。第四，合理、适度发挥联想：这类文章的说明一般都要求考生作适当的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理，不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。第五，虚实结合，详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述、描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。也就是平常老师所讲的有时要泼墨如水，而有时又要惜墨如金。如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论需一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。

亮点说明：本文是一篇看图作文，采用三段式，句子结构衔接紧密，布局合理，使用高级句子。Last Monday, realizing the new year of 2017 was coming动名词作主语；I came up with an idea that we should hold a party to celebrate it.that引导同位语从句；Without any delay we had a heated discussion about what to prepare and put down all the things needed on a list.过去分词作后置定语；Besides the decorations, we also bought some fruit and drinks.介词Besides的运用非常巧妙；While I was writing “Happy New Year” on the blackboard, my classmates put up the paper festoons and balloons, cleaned the floor, and arranged the desks and chairs. While引导时间状语从句；What a joyful party would it be?问句的使用画龙点睛。