Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
 
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a
Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop.
30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

Answer 1

【小题1】great前的of 去掉
【小题2】minute→minutes
【小题3】and→but
【小题4】with→on
【小题5】when→than
【小题6】waited前加had
【小题7】other→another
【小题8】do→did
【小题9】possible→possibly
【小题10】lose→losing

解析试题分析：
【小题1】Patience is of a great importance in our daily life.。importance 为抽象名词，前面不可用冠词，所以a 去掉。
【小题2】30 minute had passed,。minute是可数名词，前面又有30，所以应用复数形式。minute改为minutes。
【小题3】30 minute had passed, and no bus came.。等了30分钟，但是没有汽车来。应该是转折关系。and改为but。
【小题4】I decided to walk with foot.。固定短语on foot，所以 with 改为 on。
【小题5】But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.。固定句型no sooner…than，所以when改为than。
【小题6】I thought if I waited for one more minute。waited 动作应发生在动词thought之前，所以应该用过去完成时，waited 前面加had。
【小题7】I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes.“再30分钟，又30分钟”应该是another 30 minutes，所以other改为another。
【小题8】Only then do I realize my problem. 事情发生在过去，所以 do改为did。
【小题9】Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in.修饰动词应该用副词，所以possible改为possibly。
【小题10】Now whenever I am close to lose my patience. be close to 短语中to 是介词所以lose改为losing。
考点：短文改错，考查发现和改正错误的能力。