Question

13．第二节 书面表达
假定你是某中学英文报编辑李华，学校将举行一次50周年校庆作品展示（exhibition），请你用英文写一则作品征集启事．要点如下：
1．作品主题：反映校园生活，表达祝福；
2．作品形式：诗词、照片、画作等；
3．截止日期：9月1日．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
With the 50^th anniversary of our school approachingwe are going to hold an exhibition in its honor．We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．
We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．Besides，you can write Chinese poems，sharing your sweet experiences of school life．Paintings are also preferred．Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．More importantly，it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life．Please send in your works before September 1^st．
We really appreciate everyone's active participation．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英文写一则作品征集启事，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：作品主题：反映校园生活，表达祝福；作品形式：诗词、照片、画作等；截止日期：9月1日．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：hold an exhibition举行展览；leave a deep impression on留下深刻印象；Besides另外；More importantly更重要的是；as well as也，还；
We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．（高分句型一）
We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．（高分句型二）
Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．（高分句型三）

解答 One possible version：
      With the 50^th anniversary of our school approaching，we are going to hold an exhibition in its honor．We sincerely hope that all students will provide original artworks to celebrate its birthday．（高分句型一）
     We will be happy to see photos of different school activities which have left a deep impression on you．（高分句型二）Besides，you can write Chinese poems，sharing your sweet experiences of school life．Paintings are also preferred．Whatever your works are，they will show your talents on such a special occasion．（高分句型三）More importantly，it is a good opportunity to extend your best wishes to the school as well as display your colorful school life．Please send in your works before September 1^st．
     We really appreciate everyone's active participation．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．