Question

现在，QQ空间(the QQ zone)越来越受到学生的欢迎，但不同的学生有不同的看法。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍学生不同的观点，并谈谈你对此事的看法。

60%的学生赞成	40%的学生反对
通过写日志(blog), 可以自由的表达所思所想； 收集信息； 分享趣事，交朋友。	学生有可能上当受骗； 浪费时间、精力和金钱； 影响学业。

注意：词数不少于100.
Nowadays, the QQ zone has become more and more popular among middle
school students, but different students hold different views about this phenomenon.
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Answer 1

Nowadays, the QQ zone has become more and more popular among middle school students, but different students hold different views about this phenomenon.
60% of the students think it helpful because they can express themselves freely by writing blogs. What’s more, it is convenient for them to collect information. Another reason why they like the QQ zone is that it is a place where they share interesting things and make friends.
Other students, however, are strongly against the QQ zone, saying that students can be easily cheated on the QQ zone. To make things worse, they will waste not only their money but also their energy and time, which may influence their studies.
In my opinion, the QQ zone is a useful tool as it can provide us with access to updated information about the world, but we should learn to make proper use of it.

试题分析：本篇写作题材是对QQ空间的两种不同观点。这种文章一般分四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】范文句式复杂多变：60% of the students think it helpful because they can express themselves freely by writing blogs. 这句话用了it做形式宾语，it is convenient for them to collect information. 这句话用了it做形式主语，Another reason why they like the QQ zone is that it is a place where they share interesting things and make friends.这句话用了定语从句和表语从句，  Other students, however, are strongly against the QQ zone, saying that students can be easily cheated on the QQ zone. 这句话用现在分词做伴随状语，they will waste not only their money but also their energy and time, which may influence their studies.这句话用了定语从句，还有文章还使用了What’s more, however, To make things worse,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。