假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
One Sunday，I was reading my book while it suddenly occurred to me that it was mother birthday the next day．However，I forgot it complete．I was worried that I didn't prepare any present to her．At that moment，idea of online shopping came to my mind．I clicked the mouse and search some famous shopping websites．Having compared the prices of many dress，I chose one with a reasonable price which I supposed Mum would appreciate it and bought it as soon as possible．The next day I received the dress as expected without get out of my room．You see，online shopping is very convenient that it has made our life colorful．

分析一个星期天作者突然想起再过两天就是妈妈的生日，但是却忘记了给妈妈准备礼物，于是作者上网通过比较给妈妈买了一件裙子，第二天作者就收到了衣服．网上购物真是方便快捷．

解答 One Sunday，I was reading my book while it suddenly occurred to me that it was mother birthday the next day．However，I forgot it complete．I was worried that I didn't prepare any present to her．At that moment，∧idea of online shopping came to my mind．I clicked the mouse and search some famous shopping websites．Having compared the prices of many dress，I chose one with a reasonable price which I supposed Mum would appreciate it and bought it as soon as possible．The next day I received the dress as expected without get out of my room．You see，online shopping is very convenient that it has made our life colorful．
详解：
71．while改为when；考查时间状语从句，主、从句表示的是两个同时（或几乎同时）发生的短暂性动作是要用副词when，此处when相当于at that time．
72．mother改为mother's；考查名词所有格，名词birthday前面用所有格形式作定语．
73．complete改为completely；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词forgot．
74．to改为for；考查介词，prepare sth for sb是固定搭配，意为"为某人准备某物"．
75．idea前加the；考查冠词，名词idea后面有介词短语 of online shopping 限制，故前面加定冠词the表示特指．
76．search改为searched；考查动词，此处的动词search与前面的clicked是and连接的并列谓语，动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时．
77．dress改为dresses；考查名词单复数，dress是可数名词，前面有many修饰，故用复数形式dresses．
78．删除it；考查定语从句，在这个定语从句中关系代词which作动词appreciate的宾语，it是多余成分，故去掉．
79．get改为getting；考查非谓语动词，介词without后面要跟动名词形式．
80．very改为so；考查副词，此处用so与后面的that构成"so…that…"结构，意为"如此…以至于…"．

点评阅读短文，了解大意，确定基本时态；运用所掌握的基本知识多方面分析每个句子以及句子间的结构关系，找出文中错误加以修改．

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