Question

假设你是李华，最近发现你的好友林涛经常不参加学校组织的课间跑操活动(the running during the break time)，也很少在课外参加体育活动，根据以下要点，用英语给他写封信，交流对体育运动的看法。

1.发表自己的看法   2.简要说明原因    3.提供建议和帮助

注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.作文开头已给，不计入词数。词数100--120左右。

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to find that

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lin Tao,

I’m sorry to find that you are often absent from the running organized by our school during the break time. And I seldom find you take any other exercise after school.

In my opinion, it is not good for you to do so. As you know, physical exercise is of great importance to our health as well as our school study. Only when we are strong and healthy can we have enough energy to learn our lessons efficiently. On the contrary, if we spend all our time on subject study, we’ll become weak for lack of exercise, which will have a bad effect on our study.

Therefore, I suggest that you should take as much exercise as you can.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。你的好友林涛经常不参加学校组织的课间跑操活动(the running during the break time)，也很少在课外参加体育活动，根据以下要点，用英语给他写封信，交流对体育运动的看法。要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。象范文的Only when we are strong and healthy can we have enough energy to learn our lessons efficiently.这是倒装句和使用了if we spend all our time on subject study, we’ll become weak for lack of exercise, which will have a bad effect on our study.非限制性定语从句，还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，象On the contrary, Therefore,等词，这样文章显得更连贯。

考点：考查书信类短文写作。

点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。