Question

【题目】你的学校要举行征文比赛，题目为“My Favourite Festival”， 请以此为题写一篇文章参加比赛，介绍你最喜欢的一个节日。要点如下：

5. 节日的庆祝时间；

6. 节日的象征或传统食物；

7. 节日的庆祝方式。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My Favourite Festival

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version1

The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to be beloved ones at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文要求写篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的节日。文章给出了汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：which引导的非限制性定语从句The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China；They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.；部分倒装Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.。 2.使用了重要短语：one of the most important traditional festivals最重要的传统节日之一；enjoy a large meal with their family和家人一起吃丰盛的大餐。