Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下：

1) 你给他的学习建议

2) 介绍你的帮助计划

3) 对结果的展望

注意：

1) 词数100词左右；

2) 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3) 邮件开头结尾已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August.Welcome!As I know,you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.

Learning a foreign language needs great efforts.Apparently,I’d like to be your Teacher and send you an e-book wit my teaching schedule later.Besides,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查书信类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华，你的英国好友 Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下：1) 你给他的学习建议2) 介绍你的帮助计划3) 对结果的展望。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头简要说明很高兴好友来中国旅游，接着就如何学好中文给出自己的一些建议，文章最后对方承诺自己会尽最大的努力帮好友学好中文。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。例如 ：be interested in对……感兴趣，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如：.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。Besides ,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。