Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，讲述上周你参加学校英文歌曲演唱比赛的过程以及你的感受。

注意：

1. 短文必需包括图片的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

2. 词数不少于120。

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Monday, our monitor announced to our class that an English Song Singing Competition would be held in the school auditorium on Friday afternoon. On hearing the news, some classmates signed up for it immediately. I was considering whether to participate when my English teacher approached and told me that it was a good chance to show off my talent. Encouraged by her, I decided to have a try.

During the following days, I practised the song I picked over and over again until I thought I was well prepared for the coming competition. Then came the big day. I did a really good job and won the first prize, which made me so excited.

By getting involved in the competition I gained more self-confidence and my English was improved a lot. This would certainly be one of the most memorable experiences for me!

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，讲述上周你参加学校英文歌曲演唱比赛的过程以及你的感受。注意：1. 短文必需包括图片的所有内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;2. 词数不少于120。3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称. 要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】Last Monday, our monitor announced to our class that an English Song Singing Competition would be held in the school auditorium on Friday afternoon.句中运用了宾语从句和过去将来时态的被动语态；I was considering whether to participate when my English teacher approached and told me that it was a good chance to show off my talent.疑问词加动词不定式，时间状语从句，和宾语从句精彩结合；Encouraged by her, I decided to have a try.过去分词作状语，运用恰到好处；I did a really good job and won the first prize, which made me so excited.非限制性定语从句在句中使用；This would certainly be one of the most memorable experiences for me! 最后一句中使用了形容词的最高级，用法巧妙。