Question

毕业前夕，你班决定给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议：

(1) 送影集(album)，里面有每个同学的照片；(2) 送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福。

请以"An Album or a Tape"为题，用英语写一篇短文。首先简述以上两条建议，然后表明你同意其中哪一条．并说明理由（至少两点）。

注意：1．短文必须以第一人称书写。

2．词数：100词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

We are leaving school and we decide to give a gift to Mr. Li who has taught us for three years_____________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

We are leaving school and we decide to give a gift to Mr. Li who has taught us for three years. Two suggestions have been provided by our classmates. One is that we may give him an album with photos of all the students in our class. The other suggestion is that a tape in which our best wishes are recorded should be given to him.

In my opinion, we had better buy an album for Mr. Li. First, an album is easier to be kept than a tape. A tape may be easily destroyed a few years later and does not work. Second, I think, the photos in the album can easily remind Mr. Li of his lovely students and the good days when he got together with us. Third, voice may be changed a lot after many years as to us young students, while faces do not have such great changes. In a word, I suggest .we take photos in time and present them in the album to Mr. Li.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些短语give sb sth给某人某物；in one’s opinion 在某人看来；get together with与。。在一起；in a word总而言之；One is that we may give him an album with photos of all the students in our class.这个句子中that引导表语从句；The other suggestion is that a tape in which our best wishes are recorded should be given to him这个句子中that引导表语从句，in which引导tape的定语从句。In a word, I suggest .we take photos in time and present them in the album to Mr. Li这个句子suggest当建议讲，宾语从句should do 其中should可以省略；

考点： 提纲类作文