Question

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Samaranch served as the president of the International Olympic Committee for twenty-one years.

During his term, he promote the development of the Olympic Games but rescued the organization from the financial crisis in the 1970s. He tried their best to work for the organization and he also cared and supported the physical cause of China. The old man did a lot of works to help China to succeed in hold the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. In April 21, 2010, Samaranch died of heart attack in Barcelona, Spain, which he was born. We will always remember the old man, who made great contributions for the Olympic Games.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

  the去掉

 promote改为promoted

 but改为and

 their改为his 

 cared后加for或about

 works改为work

 hold改为holding

 In改为On 

 which改为where 或which前加in

 for改为to

【解析】

试题分析：

 president做为职位，前面不加冠词： the去掉

 时间是During his term 可知是用一般过去式：promote改为promoted

 他促进了奥运会的发展并且拯救了这个组织免于经济危机。两句话是并列关系：but改为and

 主语是he，人称代词：their改为his 

 cared是不及物动词：后加for或about，表示“关心”。

 work做为“工作”是不可数名词;works改为work

 succeed in  doing成功的做…，hold改为holding

 April 21, 2010,是具体某一天：In改为On 

 先行词是Barcelona, Spain 定语从句缺少地点状语：which改为where 或which前加in

 make great contributions to对…做出贡献

考点：考查短文改错

点评：本题考查较为细致，要求考生要特别耐心答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考察基础知识较多。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，