Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你在布告栏中看到学校每日早操前将开展“疯狂英语”集中训练活动，需要招募一位英语资料编辑兼领读员，请你根据以下要点写一封自荐信，内容包括：

1.写信的目的； 2.你的特长； 3.希望被招聘。

注意：

1.总词数 100 左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

DearSirorMadam,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 3. It is noticed that our school is going to start an activity of “Crazy English” before daily morning exercise. I’ve learned that a material editor and person who leads the reading is needed. Interested in it, now I am writing to apply for the post.

Firstly, English is my favorite subject and I have a good command of oral English. Secondly, having gained much experience from oral English competitions, I am sure I am qualified for the job. Thirdly, if given the opportunity, I’ll apply myself to the job, through which I can do something good for others.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本次作文要求李华在布告栏中看到学校每日早操前将开展“疯狂英语”集中训练活动，需要招募一位英语资料编辑兼领读员，根据要点写一封自荐信。要点包括：写信的目的；你的特长；希望被招聘。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章还运用了宾语从句that our school is going to start an activity of “Crazy English” before daily morning exercise. that a material editor and person who leads the reading is needed.定语从句who leads the reading is needed. which I can do something good for others. apply for，a good command of，qualified for，Looking forward to等词汇及Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 等连接词的使用让文章更流畅。