Question

请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：1.词数100左右。 2.参考词汇：吊销驾照：revoke a driving license

Answer 1

One possible version：
My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.
How he regretted what he had done!

解析试题分析：本篇书面表达是图画作文。第一步，应仔细审图，注意图画中人或物的体貌表情特征和背景，确定图画所要传达的信息。第二步要挖掘要点，拟题纲。应该根据图画内容的不同，采用不同的段落发展方式。本篇书面表达是由四幅图组成，由图片内容不难看出图片所要表达的是关于酒后驾车的问题，可以按照事情的发展顺序写成记叙文。要求写发生在叔叔身上昨天的事情，所以文章要使用一般过去时，使用第三人称。在行文过程中要注意用适当的连接词，适当发挥想象，以充实文章内容。此外，还要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式以增加文章亮点，提供作文档次。
【亮点说明】本篇范文根据图片内容写成了一篇记叙文，讲述了叔叔的遭遇。使用了一般过去时态，字数符合要求，内容表达清楚，基本完成了写作任务。文章首先使用My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.引出要讲述的事情，然后按照时间顺序讲述了发生的事情。最后以How he regretted what he had done结尾，整篇文章内容充实，叙述详略得当。而且作者使用了As a result，After the meal, A few minutes later, Worse still等词有效地起到了连接上下文的作用，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。文章还使用了结果状语从句He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.，时间状语从句when his car ran into a tall tree.和感叹句How he regretted what he had done!
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