Question

6．假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加．请写一封电子邮件申请参加．
内容主要包括：
1．自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2．参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3．希望获准．
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好．
Dear Sir or Madam，I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．I read the announcement of the summer camp that youhave posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from differentcountries and I'd like to take part in it．I've beenlearning English for 10 years，and I speakfluent English．What is more，I'll be able to tell students from other countriesabout China and learn about their countries as well．
I hope I will beaccepted as a member of your summer camp．
Looking forward to yourreply!
Regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲作文，根据所提供的材料要点信息写一封电子邮件，申请加入一个国际中学生组织在新加坡举办的夏令营活动．要点包括：自我介绍；参加意图；希望获准．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：speakfluent English （讲流利的英语），the summer camp （夏令营），beinterested in （对…感兴趣），take part in…（参加…），learn about sth（了解某事），be accepted as （被接纳作为…），look forward to sth（期望某事）．

解答 DearSir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．（自我介绍---自己的英语能力）
I read the announcementof the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested init．【高分句型】Iknow that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to takepart in it．【高分句型】Whatis more，I'll be able to tell students from othercountries about China and learn about their countries as well．（参加意图）
I hope I will beaccepted as a member of your summer camp．（希望获准）
Looking forward to yourreply!
Regards，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．