Question

假设你是育才中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。
参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）;节能（energy saving）
注意1. 词数：120词左右；
演讲稿开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone.
I’m Li Hua from Yucai Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”…                                                                                                                                                                         
                                                                          

Answer 1

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Possible version:
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

解析试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，首先要认真阅读题目。假设你是育才中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。需要写的内容、开头和结尾已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求120词左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少。
考点：演讲稿作文
点评：本文属于演讲稿作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。