Question

随着改革开放的不断深入，最近几年越越多的中学与国外的中学建立了友好交流关系。针

对大家对这种交流看法，学校英语报对广大师生进行了调查采访。假定你是学校英语报记者，请

结合下表写一篇短文，并附上你对这种交流的看法。

????????????? 注意：? 1．词数120左右。

????????????? 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the deepening of reform and opening, more and more schools have built friendly relation with foreign schools．People have different opinions about it．According to the survey of School English Newspaper, 29% of the interviewees support it, while 63% are against it, with 8% indifferent to it．

????????????? The people who support the relation believe it contributes to the cultural exchanges and helps Chinese students to experience the life and study of foreign students and to set a higher pursuit．However, the people against it think it is just a waste of money and time．They said it makes no difference to our school．What’s worse, it will cause the unnecessary mutual competition between the schools．The people indifferent to it said it had nothing to do with them and it is only the few people’s feast．

????????????? As far as I’m concerned, all the friendly schools should make more efforts to make the most of the exchanges and make them beneficial to all the staff and students．

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对与国外的中学建立友好交流关系的不同观点，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学反对的观点，然后是赞同的观点，还有无所谓的态度，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

【亮点说明】范文结构清晰，语言流畅，多用词组和句型：makes no difference to 对…没有影响，What’s worse更糟糕的是, had nothing to do with 和…无关， As far as I’m concerned据我所知, make the most of 充分利用，make more efforts 更加努力，According to the survey of School English Newspaper, 29% of the interviewees support it, while 63% are against it, with 8% indifferent to it．这句话用了with复合结构， The people who support the relation believe it contributes to the cultural exchanges and helps Chinese students to experience the life and study of foreign students and to set a higher pursuit．这句话用了定语从句，However, the people against it think it is just a waste of money and time．这句话用了it做形式主语。

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