Question

随着人类社会的发展，越来越多的动植物濒临灭绝。请你根据以下提示，以 “Wildlife Protection”为题为某中学生英语报写一篇100词左右的稿件，说明如何保护濒危野生动植物，以纪念5月22日“世界野生动物保护日”。

原因	1、栖息地破坏     2、食物短缺     3、过度猎杀     ……
如何保护	1、保护环境       2、建立保护区   3、禁止捕杀    ……
呼吁	……

注意：（1）短文要包括以上要点，可适当发挥

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数

With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. ________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

With the development of human society, many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons. Above all, their habitat is threatened, resulting in a lack of food. Besides, they are being hunted without mercy.

As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. So we should first raise people’s awareness of protecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops, the killing can, too. Second, we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves. As for the government, it should pass laws to prevent endangered animals from being hunted. 

In a word, human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone makes a little contribution, it will make a big difference for wild animals. Let’s take action right now.

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。