Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

 

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

          2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.

I’m 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. However, I’m easy to get along and I like to make friends.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. I’m

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really interested in this position and hoped I can work for you.

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I’m 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School

                       graduating

this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. I’m good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very

             especially

fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very

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much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.

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However, I’m easy to get along∧ and I like to make friends.

Besides                   with

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】略