Question

3．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在一次车祸中受伤，因而落下残疾，之后他对生活变得非常消极．请你给他写一封信，鼓励他克服困难，勇敢地面对生活．
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Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that you are in low spirits now because you had an accident recently and got seriously injured．
                                                                               
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇鼓励朋友克服困难，勇敢地面对生活的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一 对于对方的遭遇表示同情；二 鼓励他克服困难，勇敢地面对生活；三 再次表示期盼．
高分句型：
1．There are so many people with disabilities who are still fighting for their dreams．句子里 who 引导定语从句，代指先行词people with disabilities；people with disabilities 表示"残疾人"．
有如此多的残疾人正在为了 他们的梦想而奋斗．
2．Only in this way can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future．句子里Only引导状语 in this way位于句首，主句 can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future用了部分倒装．
只有用这种方式，你才能重新获得拥有美好未来的希望．

解答 Dear Jack，
I'm sorry to hear that you are in low spirits now because you had an accident recently and got seriously injured．（对于对方的遭遇表示同情）
Life is not always smooth．We have to learn to take the bad with the good．So，you should take a positive attitude towards life．There are so many people with disabilities who are still fighting for their dreams．【高分句型一】Please don't lose heart．There is a saying，"Nothing is impossible for a willing heart．"Just remember that nothing in the world is too difficult if you put your heart into it．Only in this way can you regain your hope for a beautiful life in the future．【高分句型二】（鼓励他克服困难，勇敢地面对生活）
I look forward to hearing good news from you!（再次表示期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考查开发类作文．
写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点．不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全．通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲．