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6．假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信．信中李华提到自己在高中学习生活中遇到困难，压力很大．请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，形成健康的生活方式．     
建议内容：1．营养均衡的膳食； 2．经常参加体育锻炼； 3．乐观的人生态度
注意：
1．词数不少于100；
2．请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯．
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Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本文的要点是1．营养均衡的膳食； 2．经常参加体育锻炼； 3．乐观的人生态度．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：it's important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．重要的是，我们有一个均衡的饮食，因为我们需要足够的营养生长高大强壮．本句中it是形式主语，that引导的从句是一个主语从句，在主语从句中because引导的是原因状语从句．
亮点句型二：）Not only should we take in enough grains and meat，but we should also eat fruit and vegetables．我们不仅要吃足够的谷物和肉，还要吃水果和蔬菜．本句是由not only，but also引导的并列句，not only置于句首，句子倒装．
亮点句型三：More importantly，we should develop a positive attitude，which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens．更重要的是，我们应该培养一种积极的态度，无论发生什么事情，我们都能积极地看待事情．本句中which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens，引导的非限制性定语从句，定语从句中no matter what happes是一个让步状语从句．

解答 All of us want to live a healthy life．The following are some useful tips．
          First，it's important that we have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．（亮点句型一）Not only should we take in enough grains and meat，but we should also eat fruit and vegetables．（亮点句型二）Second，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us to keep fit and release stress．More importantly，we should develop a positive attitude，which allows us to look at things positively no matter what happens．（亮点句型三）Even if we are in a difficult situation，we should never lose hope．
          Proper food，regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．