Question

18．假设你是大庆实验中学学生李华，得知英国学生Eric 作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习．请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件，表示欢迎．
1．介绍与大庆生活有关的信息（如地理位置、气候、市民等）；
2．介绍本班情况；
3．希望Eric做哪些事情，以增进中英学生间的了解和友谊．
注意：1．可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
2．词数100左右；开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：交换生 an exchange student
Dear Eric，
I'm Li Hua，a student of Daqing Shiyan High School．
          ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Daqing，situated in the north of China，is famous for oil．
在介绍地理位置时，使用了situated in…非谓语动词做状语；
（高分句型二）When you are here，it'll be great if you introduce your school to us so that we can have a better understanding of British culture．
使用了It 做形式主语的句型，It will be great if you…如果你做…我们会很感谢的；
（高分句型三）You can also join in our after-class activities，which will help you to make more friends．
该句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，which做主语指代前面整个句子．
高级词汇：be situated in 坐落于；be  considered as 被认为是；
Meanwhile表示与此同时；so that 以便；

解答 I'm Li Hua，a student of Daqing Shiyan High School．We are all excited to hear you will study with us as an exchange student．Welcome to our class!I'd like to introduce the city of Daqing and the class to you．
（高分句型一）Daqing，situated in the north of China，is famous for oil．（介绍地理位置气候）It's cold in winter while it's hot in summer．The people here are very friendly．Meanwhile，（介绍本班学生情况）our class looks like a family．Teamwork is considered as the class spirit．（高分句型二）When you are here，it'll be great if you introduce your school to us so that we can have a better understanding of British culture．（高分句型三）You can also join in our after-class activities，which will help you to make more friends．
We all look forward to your coming．（表达对 Eric到来的欢迎）
Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

点评 提纲作文实际上是对考生的思路以及文章的写作范围给出了明确的限定，因此考生在写作时，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥；要根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；注意句子的时态，词语的丰富和句型的多样性．