Question

17．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，上周你们学校迎来荷兰的交换生，作为校园电视台小记者请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以"Friends Come from the Netherland"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60；
提示词：Chinese knots中国结，Beijing Opera make-up脸谱．

（请勿必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内）

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，上周你们学校迎来荷兰的交换生，作为校园电视台小记者请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以"Friends Come from the Netherland"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点 2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
（高分句型一）the Netherlands students and teachers arrived and took part in our flag-raising ceremony，during which，I，one of the journalists，made a speech to welcome them on behalf of all the faculty and students．
during which是非限制性定语从句，表示在升国旗期间；
（高分句型二）they were taken to the Forbidden City for a visit where they were shocked at the wisdom of the ancient Chinese that they took enormous pictures as memory
该句使用被动句式they were taken…；where是一个定语从句，修饰先行词紫禁城；
（高分句型三）When asked about their feelings and gains，they always put their thumbs up and told me it was a terrific trip and there was admiration in their eyes．
When asked…是when引导一个时间状语从句，省略了they are…，当他们被问收获时…

解答 Last week，our school received and treated friends coming from the Netherland，who were exchange students and teachers．During the week，took part in various activities together，which was really great and memorable．（图一内容）
    Early on Monday morning，（高分句型一）the Netherlands students and teachers arrived and took part in our flag-raising ceremony，during which，I，one of the journalists，made a speech to welcome them on behalf of all the faculty and students．
    （图二内容） During the following days，they had a variety of special classes to learn traditional Chinese culture．The most impressive is an art class．From this class，they learnt a lot about Chinese characters and were taught to write Chinese characters under the guidance of the art teacher．Besides，they also learnt about Peking opera from the art teachers，and made Peking opera make-ups as well．During the classes，they always listened carefully with big ears and an open mouth．And they couldn't wait to raise their hands with a smiling face when they were asked to answer some questions or share their feelings．
     On Wednesday，（图三内容）（高分句型二）they were taken to the Forbidden City for a visit where they were shocked at the wisdom of the ancient Chinese that they took enormous pictures as memory．During the visit，they listened to the guide attentively，asking questions and making comments．（高分句型三）When asked about their feelings and gains，they always put their thumbs up and told me it was a terrific trip and there was admiration in their eyes．
    （图四内容）Time flew，we had to say goodbye to each other．On the very day of departure，we gave them Chinese knots as a gift，expressing our miss and love for each other．

点评 这类文章书写时，需要做到脉络清晰，并且观点明确，理由得当．首先审题，明白文章的话题主要是什么，也就是整篇文章的中心，其次就是要抓住题目给出的主要内容，这也就是给文章的主要脉络进行了定格，所以这类文章在书写时，对于预言逻辑能力的运用能力，词汇和句型的使用能力，文章连接的高要求较高，同时学生在书写时，对于字数也要进行适当的控制．