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　　假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生，暑假打算去乡村度假．请根据下面两幅图提供的信息，写一篇短文．简要说明城市生活环境的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因．

　　注意：1．短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整；

　　　　　2．词数：100左右．

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One possible version 　　I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems, such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise. In the countryside I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are singing. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What's more, I can climb the hills. All this will be interesting and good for my health. Above all, I can learn more about nature. So I want to go to the countryside for a change .I'm looking forward to the coming of my summer holiday. 　　审题 　　(1)体裁：议论文，着重说明你去乡村度假的原因 　　(2)主要时态：一般现在时，说明城市生活的不足 　　(3)人称：第一人称I 　　(4)要点 　　①暑假去乡村度假 　　②城市生活环境的不足(拥挤、空气污染、噪音等，任选两项) 　　③乡村环境的优美(空气、树、阳光、水、动物、山、农舍等，任选三项) 　　④乡村生活的乐趣(钓鱼、爬山、游泳、划船、摘果子、放牛、散步等，任选两项) 　　⑤结尾 　　(5)提纲要领 　　go to the countryside for a holiday/ spend my holiday in the countryside 　　be crowded, there be air pollution and great noise 　　It's good / comfortable to live in... because… 　　I can…in the country. 　　In a word, … 　　注意：①此类题关键在于审图，要充分挖掘图中所传达出的信息．②这篇文章为议论文，所以要先表明自己的观点，结尾的时候也要再次说明观点．