Question

短文改错

该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。

Three years ago I became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my classes, that greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make a use of it what determines who you are.

Answer 1

短文改错

Three years ago I became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus

                                                   Disappointed

and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patiently and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the

                                              patient                Besides/ Also

friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hardly and got along well ∧ my

                                                         hard                with

teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available. Soon, I became one of the top

                                               were

students in my classes, that greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated. My experience tells

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me that it is not what you are given but how you make a use of it what determines who you are.

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