Question

假设你是李华，你的英国同学Emily来信让你建议在中国云南旅游的一些必到之处。请根据以下提示给Emily写封建议信，要点包括：

1.可到丽江小镇。这里海拔约2500米，在这里体验纳西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的户外酒吧(bar)。

2.再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）这里每年都吸引数以百万计的游客。

3.再到昆明游览云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接触多种不同的少数民族文化（minority cultures）。

要求：1.必须包括以上要点，可适当补充 2.词数120左右

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                                                                  Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Emily，

Glad to hear from you. You have asked me for my advice on travelling in Yunnan. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters. Not only can you experience Naxi culture but also you can see different styles of outdoor bars.  Besides, it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. It is filled with world-class sights and sceneries, which draws millions of tourists every year. Moreover, having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice. You can get in touch with a variety of minority cultures of China.

I hope you will have a good time travelling. I am looking forward to hearing from you and can hardly wait to share your joy of the trip.

                                                         Yours,

                                                         Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇应用文。让学生写书信是高考中，常见的题材形式。学生感到很熟悉。成文时应该注意以下几点：1.书信内容要齐全。（1）可到丽江小镇。这里海拔约2500米，在这里体验纳西文化（Naxi Culture）及很多不同特色的户外酒吧(bar)。（2）再到香格里拉（Shangri-La）这里每年都吸引数以百万计的游客。（3）再到昆明游览云南民族村（Yunnan Nationalities Villages）,接触多种不同的少数民族文化（minority cultures）。2.人称：第一人称；3.时态：一般现在时；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

【亮点说明】文章使用了从句：I suggest that you fly directly to Lijiang Town, which is a beautiful town with an altitude of about 2500 meters.  it would be a good idea if you pay a visit to the wonderful Shangri-La. 高级句型：not only。。。but also。。。  非谓语动词短语：having a walk in the Yunnan Nationalities Villages is a good choice.   It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.  短语：looking forward to；have a good time；get in touch with；pay a visit to；hear from；插入语及连词的使用：To begin with, Besides, Moreover。

考点：考查学生语言综合运用能力。