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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从笫11处起)不计分。

Mr. Black is my favorite teacher, which is 1.7 meters in height. Before graduating from college, he became the senior high school teacher. Since then, he taught math for a few decade. It's said that he will retire early from his position next year owing to poorly health conditions. During his teaching years, he not only can make his students to learn well, but also is well-known for her unique teaching methods of how to effectively inspire students’ enthusiasm. I didn’t like math a year ago. For me, it seemed bored and difficult. He was the only teacher that usually helps me with patience. Now I'm good at math.

Answer 1

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【解析】1. 此处teacher是先行词，指人，在后面的定语从句中做主语，故把which改为who。

2. 句意：大学毕业之后，他成了一名高中教师。根据常识可知，应该是在大学毕业后成为老师的，故把Before改为After。

3. 句意：大学毕业之后，他成了一名高中教师。泛指一名教师，故把the改为a。

4. 根据Since then可知，句子用现在完成时态，故在he后面加has。

5. a few修饰可数名词复数，故把decade改为decades。

6. 形容词修饰名词，故把poorly改为poor。

7. 固定结构：make sb. do sth.，故把make his students to learn well中的to去掉。

8. 根据句首的Mr. Black可知，把her改为his。

9. 句意：对我来说，这似乎是令人厌烦和困难的。形容事物要用-ing形式的形容词，故把bored改为boring。

10. 句意：他是唯一一位耐心帮助我的老师。这里指的是过去的事，所以句子用一般过去时态，故把help---helped。