Question

随着网络的发展，越来越多的中学生创建了自己的博客，对于中学生该不该有自己的博客这一问题，上周你们班进行了一次讨论，以下是讨论结果：

下表是本次调查的结果，请你就此结果写一篇调查报告，并适当阐述自己的观点。

赞成者认为	反对者认为
1．写网络日志可以提高写作技能； 2．博客可以用来消遣，娱乐，调整心情； 3．通过博客可展示自我，结识朋友。	1. 管理博客花费学生很多时间； 2.过分关注博客会导致与周围的人关系疏远； 3博客容易泄露个人隐私。

写作要求：

1.阐述支持者的观点，反对者的观点以及你自己的观点

2.词数100左右；

3.文章的开头已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：

博客 blog 写网络日志：keep online journals 消遣，娱乐：entertain 隐私：privacy

Last week, we had a discussion on whether middle school students should have their own blogs or not. Opinions are divided.                                  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

   Last week, we had a discussion on whether middle school students should have their own blogs or not. Opinions are divided.

Some students who approve of having blogs think that blogs are beneficial to middle school students. First, keeping online journals can improve their writing skills. Second, they can use their blogs to entertain and adjust themselves. Last bur not the least, by keeping blogs, not only can they show their talents, but they can also make more friends with those who share similar interests.

However, others have opposite ideas, arguing that it takes students too much time to manage blogs. If they spend too much time on their blogs, they may eventually lose touch with those around you. What\s worse, blogs makes it easy to let out privacy.

In my opinion, as middle school students we can have our own blog to make our life more colorful, but we should keep in mind that the most important thing for us is our study.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于正反观点类的议论文，要求考生从正反两方面写出对于网络博客的观点。给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点:考查议论文写作 

点评：本文题型是考生分词熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性。