Question

3．假如你是某中学高三（1）班的学生李明，写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，因为你校图书馆将选择招募课余学生图书管理员．信必须包括以下内容：
•简要介绍个人特长
•表达希望成为课余学生图书管理员的愿望
•谈谈你作为课余学生图书管理员，对学校图书馆管理提出一些建议
注意：文中请勿提及真实学校
Dear Sir/Madam．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封信．写作要点包括：1．描述你在高中生活中遇到的最大挑战； 2．介绍你的应对措施及感悟．写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一和第二人称为主．重要短语：have great interest in （对…有兴趣），in hope of （希望），in one's opinion （某人看来），involve sth （牵连，卷入…），be exposed to （接触；暴露于；遭受），put something in order （使…有秩序），take notes of（记笔记），a big deal （重要事情），extend the efficiency （提高效率），due to （由于），act as（充当，作为…），broaden one's horizon （扩大眼界…），admit sb into（允许某人进入…），look forward to（期望…）．
【高分句型】
1．thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．
这里是动名词putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work作主语，句子的谓语动词是is，表语为not a big deal for me．主语中由as well as连接了两个并列的动名词．
2．If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．
这里是if从句中的省略，可理解为If I am accepted，主句为I wonder if the number of school library can be increased，主句中是由if引导的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    I am Li Ming in Grade 3 Class 1．I'm writing to express that I have great interest in the position of an after-school librarian．I have prepared fully in hope of being accepted．（表达希望成为课余学生图书管里员的愿望）
     In my opinion，this job involves patience and responsibility．Having been a member of the students union for two years，I have been exposed to various trivial things，thus putting the messy books in good order as well as taking notes of the details in the library work is not a big deal for me．【高分句型】Moreover，I know to the largest content what the real concept of team work is．Enough emphasis on collective benefits has always helped me extend the efficiency due to my experience in after-school activities．Thus I believe this experience will help me do better if I get this job．（介绍个人特长）
      If accepted，I wonder if the number of school library can be increased．【高分句型】We know books act as a way to broaden our horizon，thus the more books we have，the more accesses to knowledge we can have．【高分句型】（对学校图书管里提出一些建议）
      I will appreciate your kindness if you admit me into the after-school librarian group．I am looking forward to  your reply．
Best  regards
Li Ming

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．