Question

【题目】请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind". Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

注意：1．无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。

2．除诗歌外，文体不限。

3．文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

4．词数为120左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school. I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public. I could only sing to myself most of the time. Somehow, I wanted to have a try. When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help. When I felt I was ready, the day came. Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. It turned out that I won the first prize .

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life. If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared. Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是要写一篇命题作文。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

【亮点分析】

第一句用了一个表语从句There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. 不

可置否的是，我们都渴望人生成功的黄金机会。第二句也是一个that引导的表语从句However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. 然而，很多人都不清楚机会总是偏爱有准备的人。第三句是一个until引导的时间状语从句。I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.直到我上了高中我才明白了这个道理。第二段第五句是一个when引导的时间状语从句 When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. 当我告诉了我的父母，他们鼓励我听从我内心的声音，告诉我只要我准备好了，我就能成功。With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help.第八句 When I felt I was ready, the day came.是一个when引导的时间状语从句，当我感觉自己准备好了的时候，那天来临了。 第九句用了一个分词做状语。Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. 第二段最后一句是一个宾语从句It turned out that I won the first prize .结果我得了一等奖。 第三段第二句是ｉｆ引导的条件句 If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared. 如果你没有成功，可能是因为你没有好好准备。除了从句以外，文章还用了一些很好的短语：as long as 只要…turn to …for help向…求助；taught me a precious lesson 给我上了珍贵的一课。