Question

假设你是王明，本周是你们学校“环境保护宣传周”，请根据下列提示的要点，为宣传栏写引言，介绍保护珍稀动物的情况。

[写作内容] 

必要性	动物是人类亲密的朋友，尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界变得丰富多彩。
现状	最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人为伤害，深表震惊。
原因	有些人对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心。
措施	1.牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责。 2. 应学习宣传(publicize)其意义。

 [写作要求]

1．请根据以上提示内容写一篇短文，只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．第一句已给出，不计入总句数。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Animals are our close friends．                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

                                                                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Animals are our close friends. Without them，especially the rare species，the world would be too dull to live in．Unfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．

Therefore，we should take active measures，studying and publicizing the information about rare animals．Keep in mind that protecting animals is protecting ourselves and thus it is our duty to do it well．

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文的写作。话题是环境保护宣传周，要点是以提纲的形式表示的，要适当增加细节，不能只是把要点翻译成英语、，注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。nfortunately, we have heard recently that rare animals，even when kept in the zoo，couldn’t escape being hurt or killed，at which we can feel nothing but shocked．这句话用了状语从句的省略句型， The reason is that some people lack understanding of the existence of these animals and don’t care for them．

这句话是表语从句，还要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。象Therefore等等

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。因为本文的要求是不能写出提纲式，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，不能一个句式一成不变，要给读者全新的感觉。