Question

短文改错（满分10分）

   下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

            2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily                                       the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening. on

Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London, you’ll

see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use bike. If you take a bus, I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we went to work by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.

Answer 1

Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London,

                    something

you’ll see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use∧ bike. If you take a bus,

                     and                                a/bikes

I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The

you

underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was

             quick

often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we went to work by bike. I followed him.

            tired                        go

Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while

ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.

riding                                                much/去掉

解析:

第一行：测试不定代词。肯定句中应该用something；anything常用语否定句或疑问句中。

第二行：测试连词和名词。肯定句中连接词应该用and；or 通常用于否定句中。bike属于可数名词需要修饰语，要么使用复数表示类别。

第三行：测试代词一致性。结合前面if you take a bus 可知此处应该用第二人称：you。

第四行：测试形容词。此处应该和expensive并列，所以改为形容词：quick。

第五行：测试形容词和虚拟语气。修饰人用tired。根据关键词：suggested 可知句子中应用：should + go 而且should 可以省略。

第六行：测试连词。在英语句子中：although和but 不能同时出现在同一个句中。所以把：but去掉。

第七行：测试省略和副词。句子：while riding a bike （takes ）only half an hour ，其实属于省略；better 本身属于比较级，只能用much修饰。