Question

16．假如你是张华，近日写信给某英文报的编辑，反映目前人们养宠物带来的问题，希望得到媒体的关注和支持．信的内容应包括以下要点：
1．宠物过多，噪音扰民；2．污染环境；3．不少人尤其孩子曾被惊吓或咬伤；4．传播疾病．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．信的开头和署名已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear editor，
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets，but they don't care about it enough．So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it．
                      
Yours faithfully，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）First of all，as is known to us，pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot．
该句型使用了as 引导的非限制性定语从句，as充当主语；
What's more，（高分句型二）it's widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment，which makes people quite uncomfortale．
句子使用了It is widely accepted that意思是人们普遍接受，为主语从句；还使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词这样一件事情；
（高分句型三）The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention．
该句型使用了that引导的标语从句；
（高分句型四）Taking all these factors into consideration，I sencerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it．
在句子里taking…into consideration是现在分词做状语，是非谓语动形式；
高级词汇：for the following reasons接下来的原因；uncomfortale不舒服的； frighten 使某人害怕；
What's more而且表示递进；First of all首先；

解答 Dear editor，
Nowadays some people in our city are keeping too many pets，but they don't care about it enough．So I want to tell you something about the problems caused by it．
I consider the problems more and more serious for the following reasons．（高分句型一）First of all，as is known to us，pets make too much noise that trouble residents a lot．What's more，（高分句型二）it's widely accepted that animal wastes pollute the environment，which makes people quite uncomfortale．Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even sometimes bite people．（高分句型三）The most important is that pets can spread some disease and this has attracted much attention．
（高分句型四）Taking all these factors into consideration，I sencerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for it．
Yours faithfully，
Zhang Hua

点评 本文是一封书信应用文，向报社反映目前人们滥养宠物的问题．问题提示较详细，学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的．考生在写作之前要认真审题，根据提示写作主要有三段内容，第一段已经给出，开门见山表明要反映的问题；第二段反映此问题的原因及危害；第三段结束，提出自己的希望．另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时．人称用第三人称．再有就是不能根据提示内容逐字逐句的翻译形成汉式的英语，应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次．