Question

【题目】感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。假设你校正在举行一场有关“感恩”的演讲比赛，请你在“父母、老师、朋友” 中选择一个感恩对象，写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。

内容要点如下：

1. 为何感恩；

2. 如何感恩。

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．演讲稿中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3．演讲稿的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, …”

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone! it’s a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The topic of my speech is “Thank you, mum”

Like many of you, my life has been blessed with a mother who is a source of unconditional love. My mum is an ordinary housewife while I highly appreciate her kind consideration. She keeps me company, cooks me tasty dinners, and makes my room as clean as possible. On top of that, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I’m fortunate to have such a caring mother.

We know the challenging exam to realize dreams is there for me and you. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our mums. Meanwhile, express your love in return in daily life. Either a small talk with mum or a cup of tea for her, and her face will light up.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。本文根据写作要求应该分成两部分：第一部分选择一个感恩的对象，阐明感恩的原因；第二部分说明感恩的方式。

【亮点说明】本文第二段的第一句直接指明感恩的对象，并运用短语：like many of you，引起大伙的共鸣。在这一段中同时又运用高级词汇如：be blessed with、a source of unconditional love、keep sb. company、on top of等。这一段最后，用一句话总结了对母亲的感恩之情。最后一段中也同样使用高级短语诸如：appeal to sb. to do、in return等等。这是一篇演讲稿，句子不求多复杂，主要是能够使听众能够理解，产生共鸣。