Question

假设你是正在读高三的李林，你的好友张华最近给你来信，想了解你的近况，请你用英语给他写一封回信，告诉他进入高三以来你学习以及生活情况的变化，主要内容包括：

1.学习态度与学习压力的变化；2.时间安排的变化；3.你后期的打算（两点）。

注意：1.内容包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译；

2.字数120左右，文章开头已提供，不计入总词数。

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

Since entering Senior Three, a great change has taken place to me. First of all, I’m studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the College Entrance Examination. Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. What’s more, occupied with my study, I can’t afford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone, playing computer games as before.

However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three. While studying, I will make wise use of my time. By keeping a balance between study and rest, the learning efficidency, I believe, can be improved and my dream will come true.

Best wishes!                                        Yours

                                                  Li Lin

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假设你是正在读高三的李林，你的好友张华最近给你来信，想了解你的近况，请你用英语给他写一封回信，告诉他进入高三以来你学习以及生活情况的变化，主要内容包括：1.学习态度与学习压力的变化；2.时间安排的变化；3.你后期的打算（两点）。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night.用了部分倒装；However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three.包含一个宾语从句；While studying, I will make wise use of my time.现在分词作时间状语。

考点：书信类书面表达