Question

该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。

Attention please, everyone. We have accepted the weather forecast on the radio this

morning that there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure shut the windows and

doors until you leave your classrooms. The sports meet that we planned to hold on

tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes fine, we’ll make other announcement.

We will have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is colder tomorrow ,please

dress on more clothes in time. Those who comes to school by bike ,don’t keep your

umbrella open while riding.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 accepted 改成Received

 have 改成be

 Be sure后面加 to

 until 改成before/when

 去掉on

 other 改成 another

 usually 改成Usual

 dress改成 put

 comes改成 come

 umbrella改成 umbrellas

【解析】

 这里是指收到，而不是接受

 存在有结构用there be

 固定词组

 根据句意是在你离开教室时或者之前

 tomorrow单独做时间状语

 根据句意可知是另一个声明

 固定词组as usual

 固定词组穿上

 与先行词those保持一致

 根据上文可知这里使用复数形式

【题文】假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：

优点：

1.话题广泛； 2图片丰富； 3有助于提高学习兴趣。

建议“适当降低词汇难度。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使文章连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor，

As a student reader, I’m writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．

                                                                               

【答案】

Dear editor,

  As a student reader, I’m writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I would like to suggest changing them into easier ones.

                                           Best regards

                                           Li Hua

【解析】本文是一篇半开放性的作文，是关于现行教材的看法的。主要的要点已经给出了，细节方面需要考生做适当的补充。在写作的时候，要注意使用合适的连接词，让文章更有条理更流畅。同时也要使用高级的词汇和高级的句型，让文章更有档次，更有层次。