Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，最近你班就“中学生听MP3”的现象进行了一次讨论，请你将以下讨论结果给某英文报社编辑（editor）写信，客观反映情况。词数100左右。

1. 时髦；2. 听英语焕发精神；3. 听英语提高英语水平。

1. 浪费时间、影响学习；2. 总听对听觉有害；3. 浪费金钱。

1. 合理利用；2. 控制时间。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

Recently, our class had a discussion about whether middle school students should listen to MP3 player.

40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so. Besides, you can relax while listening to the music. Thirdly, with the help of MP3 player, we can listen to English and improve our English level. Others, however, hold the opposite idea. Firstly, it has a bad effect on our studies as it takes time. What’s more, listening too much does harm to the hearing. Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.

In my opinion, we should make good use of an MP3 player and limit the time for listening if we do want to use it.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语：agree with同意；with the help of 在……帮助下；have an effect on 对……有影响；what’s more而且；in one’s opinion在某人看来；40% of them agree with the idea, saying that as a middle school student, it is fashionable to do so这个句子运用到非谓语动词作伴随状语；Thirdly, it is a waste of money to buy an MP3 player.这个句子运用到it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式。