Question

 以Nature为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文。要点如下：

1. 简述人类对大自然的依赖。

2. 随着人类的发展，生态平衡遭到破坏，人类生存的环境受到严重污染。人类正在受到大自然的惩罚。

3. 我们要善待自然，自然也会关照我们。

注意：内容可适当增减，但不可逐字翻译。

Nature

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Nature is the mother of mankind. We get almost everything from her. We live on natural food. We make clothes from natural materials. And we build our houses of stone and wood. However，with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature. Water，air and soil have been badly polluted. Some kinds of animals and plants have died out completely. As a result，man is being punished by nature. Many people suffer a lot from all kinds of diseases caused by pollution. We should treat nature well and she will look after us.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式的作文，讨论关于Nature的问题。要点是以提纲形式列出，提示里都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，注意用地道的英语表达。适当运用高级词汇和句型，时态以现在时为主，也有现在完成时和将来时，适当使用被动语态，还要注意句与句的联系。如范文的句子with the development of human beings，man has destroyed the balance of nature.这句话里的with复合结构用的很好。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作

点评：本文属于提纲类短写作，此类短文写作要求包括提纲中所给的所有要点，不能有遗漏。使用合适的连接词把要点连接成流畅合理的短文，变化使用高级句式让文章的档次更高。