Question

书面表达（满分20分）
请你根据自己的感受，写一篇题为“Why Smile is Important” 的短文。短文应包括以下要点：
1.微笑是普遍使用的面部表情——它的作用是快乐和使人平静。
2.微笑说明你友善，使人们乐于跟你在一起。
3.微笑使人忘却烦恼，减轻压力。它能改变你的情绪。
4.微笑使人精神高涨，有益身心健康。
5.……
要求: 1.除包括以上要点外，要适当增加自己的观点。
2.词数120左右。
The world always looks beautiful if you are smiling.                         
                                                                   

Answer 1

One possible version:
The world always looks beautiful if you are smiling. Your life will  be more beautiful because of your smile. As we all know, everyone recognizes smile wherever they come from. Besides, there are more reasons for why smile is so important for us.
First of all, smile is the most universal facial expression—its function is to show happiness and put people at ease. Secondly, smile is a symbol of your kindness to others. Smile can make you more attractive and people will never feel dull with you. Thirdly, smiling can reduces stress and help change your mood in a silent way. What’s more, it can help you prevent you from looking upset. Last but not least, smiling can keep you in high spirits, which will do you good both mentally and physically.
In all, smile is very important. Let’s be happy and smile every day!

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
考点：提纲作文
点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。