Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack通过E-mail询问你的暑假计划。请你从下面的网站广告中选择一项你暑假要参加的活动，作为你的假期安排，并对Jack说明理由（至少三条)

Unique Summer Camps

Check out these camps. They are really unique!

* Rock Music Camp

* Military Summer Camp

* Science Camp for Students

* Volunteering in Another Country

注意：1. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯。2.字数100字左右。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

Now I’d like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

Now I’d like to share my plan for the summer holiday with you.

Recently I've become interested in some attractive camps advertised on a website and I have made up my mind to take part in one of them---Volunteering in Another Country. I have always dreamed of being a volunteer, because I’d like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it. Besides, volunteering in another country will give me a good chance to experience a completely different culture. Most importantly, I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China.

So I’m eager to join in the activity and I’m sure I will benefit greatly from it. How about your plan for this summer holiday?

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是一个半定题作文。要求规定了写作方向，内容上可以有所选择，同学们在写这篇文章时，首先选择自己写作内容，然后要注意到这是对暑假的计划，通篇整体时态用一般将来时；然后可以写自己选择其中一项活动的原因，对活动的了解，以及自己参加活动的意义。可将以上问题分开来写，清楚地写出来，使文章显得有条理，层层递进，注意简单句和复合句以及各类连词的应用，以达到使文章丰满充实的效果。

高分句式：

1.I have always dreamed of being a volunteer, because I’d like to offer necessary help to those who are really in need of it. 我一直梦想着成为一名志愿者，因为我愿意给有需要的人一些必要的帮助。have been doing sth.是现在完成进行时。

2. Most importantly, I can exchange ideas with the local people and make them know more about China.更重要的是，我可以和当地的人们交流观点，让他们更好的了解中国。most importantly的应用，显现出层层递进的效果。