Question

书面表达（满分25分）

前不久，我县教育部门针对部分学生沉迷于网吧的现状，向全体中小学生发出了“远离网吧（Be away from the Internet Bars）”的倡议。倡议书中列举了一些危害现象，请你结合这些要点写一篇100词左右的短文，对一位沉迷于网吧的同学进行劝告。题目和开头部分已给出。

要点：

1、上网(get on-line)浪费时间和金钱，并影响 (affect) 学习；

2、网上有一些不健康的东西；

3、长时间上网对眼睛有害；

4、远离网吧是青少年的正确选择(the best choice)

Be away from the Internet Bars

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Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear friend,

I’m sorry to hear that you are too much interested in the Internet bars. That’s not right, although it can help us a lot in learning. But getting on-line is a waste of time and money and also affects your studies. It also does harm to your eyes and health. At the same time, it may harm you because there is something bad for the students. “Be away from Internet Bars” is the best choice for us young boys and girls of the new century. Don’t get on-line. Let’s stay away from Internet bars.

【解析】

试题分析：英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。先审题，弄清写作要求，审题是写好作文的前提，理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。提醒考生注意时态及语态的使用。

考点：提纲作文。

点评：加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。会使用连接词或过渡句使句子的连接起来，读起来流畅。