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第三节　书面表达（15分）
2008年11月，乒乓球世界冠军邓亚萍求学11年终于获得剑桥大学博士学位。假如你是来自西安的刘梅，听到这个消息，兴奋不己，立刻给她写了一封祝贺信并表示了自己的崇敬之情。内容包括：
⒈ 表示祝贺；⒉ 介绍自己及爱好；⒊ 解释崇敬的原因；⒋ 学到什么及自己的决心。
参考内容：邓亚萍退出体坛后到清华大学，英国的Cambridge University 及 Nottingham University 学习，11年后获得经济学博士学位。
参考词汇：博士学位  doctor’s degree 自信 self-confidence 决心  determination 崇敬  admire  
注意：⒈ 词数100左右；⒉ 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Yaping,
First, I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on receiving the degree from Cambridge University.
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Your fan,
Liu Mei

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Dear Yaping,
First, I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on receiving the degree from Cambridge University.
I am Liu Mei, a senior student from Xi’an. I am a keen follower of table tennis and eager to write to you for long. I often watch table tennis games and your excellent skills have made a deep impression on me. After you retire from the sport, you went to Tsinghua University, Cambridge University and Nottingham University to study. After 11 years’ hard work, your dream has come true, which inspires me a lot. I admire you not only for your contributions to sports but also for your strong will and determination as well as your self-confidence. You set me a good example. I am determined to learn from you.
Wish you an even brighter future and a happier life.
Your fan,
Liu Mei

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