Question

18．假设你是某国际学校学生会的主席李华．你校学生会打算组织一次有机蔬菜采摘活动．请你用英语写一份通知．内容包括：
1．活动目的：了解有机蔬菜的种植；体验采摘乐趣；
2．活动时间及地点：本周日上午，西星农场；
3．活动内容：导游带领参观农场；采摘蔬菜（黄瓜，西红柿，茄子等）；在农场提供的厨房亲自烹饪自己摘到的蔬菜．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：采摘：pick    有机农业：organic farming
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息用英语写一份通知，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：活动目的：了解有机蔬菜的种植；体验采摘乐趣；活动时间及地点：本周日上午，西星农场；活动内容：导游带领参观农场；采摘蔬菜（黄瓜，西红柿，茄子等）；在农场提供的厨房亲自烹饪自己摘到的蔬菜． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables，we are going to hold an Organic Vegetable Picking this Sunday morning on Xixing Farm．（高分句型一）句中To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables属于不定式作目的状语
First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．（高分句型二）句中First of all意思是"首先"，句中使用了there be句型
The most exciting part is that we will cook the vegetables we pick．（高分句型三）句中that为表语从句

解答 Notice
     To let us experience the joy of picking vegetables in person and learn more about organic vegetables，we are going to hold an Organic Vegetable Picking this Sunday morning on Xixing Farm．（高分句型一）
      First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．Then we will pick organic vegetables like cucumbers．First of all，there will be a guided tour of the farm to show us how to plant organic vegetables．（高分句型二）Then we will pick organic vegetables like cucumbers，tomatoes and eggplants．The most exciting part is that we will cook the vegetables we pick．（高分句型三）What an interesting experience it will be!
       Come and join us!Everybody is welcome!
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点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．