Question

【题目】假如你叫李津，在报纸上看到一幅成语漫画，很有感触。请给你的英国笔友写一封邮件，描述这幅漫画并谈谈自己的感想。

注意：1. 词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tony,

I saw an interesting carton in a newspaper.

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Yours

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I saw an interesting carton in a newspaper. I was very impressed. Now, I'd like to share this idiom story with you and my thoughts.

This fable mainly tells the story of the followers to drink wine. They competed to draw snakes. A follower, who was proud of being faster than the others, added feet to the snake. In the end, he failed to drink and was laughed at by another follower.

Gilding the lily tells people that doing extra things is not good for them, and doing too much is bad for them. Therefore, we should grasp the truth of the scale and timing, because truth and fallacy are often only one step apart. I also hope you will be inspired by it.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假如你叫李津，在报纸上看到一幅成语漫画，很有感触；请给你的英国笔友写一封邮件，描述这幅漫画并谈谈自己的感想。根据漫画可知，本篇要介绍中国成语故事“画蛇添足”，介绍传统故事，时态应为一般故去时。人称使用第三人称。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be very impressed（很有感触），idiom story（成语故事），fable（寓言），Gilding the lily（画蛇添足）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。