Question

作为中学生的你，在生活中碰到了两个问题：

1、你的父母对你要求近似乎苛刻，总要求你取得好成绩。尽管你已经养成了每天弹一小时钢琴的习惯，但父母却要求、甚至威胁你不要弹钢琴，多把注意力放到英语学习上；

2、你为自己的体重感到羞愧。尽管你已经听从医生的建议“多运动、少饮食”了，但还是在发胖。为此你感到很窘迫，明知吃减肥药对身体有害，但还想冒险一试。

请以Worried Angel的名义向Mr. Advice写一封120词左右的求助信。

注意：

文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入文章的总词数；

Dear Mr. Advice，

I am quite upset by two problems and don’t know how to deal with them.

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Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the boring life.

Sincerely yours,

Worried Angel

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Advice:

I am quite upset by two problems and don’t know how to deal with them.

My parents are hard on me and always want me to achieve high grades at school. Though I have developed a habit of playing the piano for one hour every day, my parents just require me to pay more attention to English study. They even want to punish me if I don’t drop it.

I am quite ashamed of my weight. I follow doctors’ advice and insist on working out every day, I pay attention to my diet as well, but I am still putting on weight! My weight just makes me feel embassassed all the time. Do I really have to risk my health for a slim figure and take some weight-loss pills? They have side effects on our health!

Please give me some suggestions on how to get out of the terrible situation.

Sincerely yours,

Worried Angel

【解析】

试题分析：本文考查了提纲类作文的写作，作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

考点：提纲类短文写作

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。