Question

手机在中国发展很快，拥有和使用它已成为当今时尚。你班同学开展了一些调查。请根据下表提示写一篇短文，介绍这次调查内容，并且表明自己的观点。

advantages	disadvantages
1．方便，可以随时和别人联系 2．可以获取更多信息，娱乐放松	1．干扰正常工作和生活 2．驾车打手机很危险
自己的观点

注意：1．短文内容必须覆盖表格所有内容，可以适当增加，以使行文连贯；

2．短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．词数：100-120.

As is seen, mobile phone is used nowadays everywhere in China. Here is the survey we have made of how it is used.

Answer 1

As is seen, mobile phones are used everywhere in China. Here is the survey we have made of how they are used. On one hand, mobile phones make it convenient to keep us in touch with others. Besides, we can also have fun and get much information by surfing the Internet with it.

On the other hand, if we carry a mobile phone, we will be followed by calls and messages, which always disturbs our life and work. Worse still, it is very dangerous to answer the phone while driving.

As far as I am concerned, we should manage our mobile phones well. When having a meeting or lesson, we must turn it off so that it may not disturb us. Make sure we do not make any phone call when driving. In this way, mobile phone will be useful to our life.

【解析】

试题分析：本文为典型的议论文写作。围绕手机的优缺点展开，此类写作较为容易把握，题目已给定大致叙述内容，只要正确翻译即可，注意经典的短语使用以及结尾表达自己观点。

范文为经典的三段论式结构，第一段介绍手机的优点，第二段介绍手机的缺点，第三段点明自己的观点。第一段第三句mobile phones make it convenient to keep us in touch with others.使用了make it…to…的句子结构；第二段第一句if we carry a mobile phone, we will be followed by calls and messages, which always disturbs our life and work.首先使用了if领导的状语从句，另使用了which领导的非限制性定语从句；第二段最后一句it is very dangerous to answer the phone while driving使用了while领导的时间状语从句，且是省略结构；第三段第二句When having a meeting or lesson, we must turn it off so that it may not disturb us.使用了when领导的时间状语从句且是省略主语形式，以及so that领导的结果状语从句；倒数第二句中Make sure we do not make any phone call when driving.使用了when领导的时间状语从句的省略形式。在短语使用上，使用了On one hand一方面，keep in touch with保持联系，On the other hand另一方面，Worse still,更糟糕的是，As far as I am concerned就我而言，Make sure确保等经典的好短语。在词语使用上，如第一段最后一句Besides, we can also have fun and get much information by surfing the Internet with it.使用了Besides来承接上下文，连词的运用十分出彩。整篇文章在行文上结构严谨清晰，从句运用恰到好处。总结：议论文写作且是对比类文章时，采用三段论，并且用on one hand…on the other hand之类的短语表述两种观点会使文章结构清晰。

考点：考查议论文写作