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【题目】假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为＂父母是否以子女为荣＂。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
①描述调研数据；
② 分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

Answer 1

【答案】参考例文：
Recently，we made a survey about whether the parents agree that they are proud of their children．The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion．According to the survey，we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than of children．
There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference． First，conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children．This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence． Second，the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance，thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud． This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents for art and sports，which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves．
Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods，a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up．
【解析】本文属于图表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份写一则报告，通报“父母是否以子女为荣”的调研报告的内容。文章使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异。2.百分之80的父母亲以孩子为荣；百分之60的孩子认为父母以我为荣。3.分析原因：父母亲把全部的精力都放在孩子身上，孩子的成功也证明自己的教育方法是正确的；而现在的孩子因为年龄较小，并没有很强的责任感,他们并没有感受到自己承担的义务和责任。建议在写作的时候添加适当的谚语，如Everycoin has two sides.提升文采，以增加获得高分的可能性；穿插使用多种句式，让文章富有变化.同时要使用两到三个复合句，并适当使用串联词。