假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My friend Mike has benefited great from humor．He is kind but overweight，that brings him a　lot of problems．Once one of my classmates laughed him，"Why are you so fat？"We all stopped　to stare at Mike，wonder how he would answer the question．He just said in the calm voice，"Well，because of my size must be large enough to hold my heart of love．"Hearing his word，we all burst　into laughter．Not only does Mike take the joke，but he also managed to cope with the embarrassed　situation．What an important part humor plays in ours daily life!

分析本文作者通过讲述自己的一位朋友Mike的故事，旨在告诉我们幽默在生活中的重要性．
文中讲到：作者的朋友Mike是一位幽默善良但是有些胖的人，一次，班里的同学因为他胖而取笑他，问他，"你为什么这么胖啊？""嗯，因为我的块头必须足够大，这样才能容得下我充满爱的心．"他的幽默的回答不仅引来了大家的笑声，而且还化解了尴尬的局面；因此，幽默在我们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用．

解答 My friend Mike has benefited great from humor．He is kind but overweight，that brings him a lot of
                                           greatly                                                             which
problems．Once one of my classmates laughed∧him，"Why are you so fat？"We all stopped　to stare at
                                                                    at
Mike，wonder how he would answer the question．He just said in the calm voice，"Well，because of my
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size must be large enough to hold my heart of love．"Hearing his word，we all burst　into laughter．Not
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only does Mike take the joke，but he also managed to cope with the embarrassed　situation．What an
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important part humor plays in ours daily life!
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1．把great 改为greatly   考查副词的用法   此处用来修饰动词benefit；故用副词greatly
2．把that改为which   考查关系代词的用法   根据句意以及空缺处之前的逗号可知，此处是非限性定语从句，不能用关系代词that，应改为which，指代句中的形容词"overweight"
3．在him之前加at    考查固定短语的用法    固定短语laugh at"嘲笑"；此处的意思是：一次，班里的一位同学嘲笑他．
4．把wonder改为wondering   考查现在分词的用法   此处在句中做伴随状语，由于动词wonder与We构成主谓关系；故应使用现在分词
5．把the改为a    考查冠词的用法   本句的意思是：用一种平静的语气；并不表示特指；故用a
6．去掉of     考查连词的用法    because of 是介词短语，通常用在短语或单个的单词之前；由于"my size must be large enough to hold my heart of love"是一个句子，故用连词because来引导
7．把word改为words    考查名词的单复数的用法      此处的意思是：听到他的话；故应使用可数名词word的复数形式words：（说的）话
8．把does改为did     考查时态    由于该句是由连词"not only…，but （also）…"连接的两个句子，前后时态应保持一致；根据上文讲述的是过去发生的事情；故用一般过去时
9．把embarrassed改为embarrassing   考查形容词的用法   此处用作定语修饰situation（意为：局面，形势；指的是一种情形）；故应使用由现在分词转化来的形容词embarrassing
10．把ours改为our    考查人称代词的用法    此处用来修饰名词短语daily life，故应使用形容词性的物主代词；ours是名词性的物主代词，只能单独使用

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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